This is got to be the most beautiful piece of artwork I've ever lain eyes on! It's brilliant and bold and so full of depth. I must nearly beg you in hopes that you will let me use this for a novel I'm going to be publishing next year.
Given the ray shadows through the haze, I would have expected a much brighter sun. The rest of the scene is nicely laid out, I recall somthing like this earlier and see a lot of problems ironed out well. Good efforts.